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上外英语mti翻译硕士英语这科总分为100分，其间作文占60分，可以说作文的胜败直接抉择了基英的胜败。可是，基英作文并非一般的小型写作，尽管卷面上并未需求字数，但一般不举荐低于800词（或多于1000词）。
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在这个字数下，如果内容瘠薄，则无法撑起文章的规划；如果强行使用考场套路用废话充字数，则会让文章又臭又长。不管哪种情况，都会让这篇作文失利。那么，要想成功地在考场上结束一篇基英作文，需要做哪些功课？
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一、上外翻译硕士英语作文题几个特征
以下七条原则，无视其间任何一条，都会影响到究竟分数：
?fact 1: 作为非母语者，所谓的英语写作本质上是一场大型的无稿汉译英
?fact 2: 翻硕备考生的作文中有许多大学生都能辨认的基础语法差错
?fact 3: 几乎一切阅卷教师都对爆款模板文疾恶如仇
?fact 4: 改变无常的词汇、拍案叫绝的句式并不是一篇好作文的仅有判别标准
?fact 5: 优良的英文写作才能植根于详尽的精读和基础汉语写作才能
?fact 6: 英语作文相较于汉语作文更简略离题、偏题和逻辑不畅
?fact 7: 英语作文前进最快的练习方法是外刊仿写
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二、与中式英语作文划清鸿沟
中式英语作文的特征
?遣词造句直白粗暴，许多chinglish和语法遗失
?规划组织的逻辑比照清楚，但过于简略致使于非常单纯
?内容空泛，信息量低，读来结壮无力，没有思辨性
?标语式论说，用文字证明文字，喜爱吠影吠声，短少主见
?我国特征学生腔（做作联接词、高档语法、偏僻词语等）
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典型中式英语作文例文节选
online rumors
internet has become part of our life, people use computer everywhere, such as?they keep in touch with their friends and family, they also?use computer to do their work. there is no doubt that computer facilitate our life. but the problem?also comes, as there is no clear and powerful laws to limit?the act,?some people attack others by the?rude words. we also can?read the rumors on the internet, like the end of the world is coming. such rumors bring negative sides to the society. as there is no rules can punish?the person who spread the rumors, more and more people use the internet to do the immoral acts. the celebrities are the main victims. in order to catch more people’s attention, some websites spread the untrue information about the celebrities, which annoys these public figures. online rumors need to be limited.
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简析：
这段节选充分露出了绝大大都我国学生写英语作文的疑问，总结下来首要有：
①基础语法根柢功单薄。冠词、介词等根柢语法差错频出
②言语烦琐。附近意思的语句经过换词、改句式重复重复，形似内容丰厚，实则翻来覆去说相同的内容
③中式英语。根据中文表达直接组织英语句子，写出“一读就晓得是中文”的中式英语
④论说乏力。空喊标语、空概需求，没有例子-分析-结论的逻辑链条，没有循证论说的写作气质。?
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三、范文赏析：
internet culture: amusing ourselves to death
(文娱至死，标题吸睛)
born at the turn of centuries at the height of the internet age, we entered a world of entertainment industries thriving across the board. too many?of us have become slaves to numerous video games and tv plays that were supposed to free us and give us more time to experience life. we are gradually engrossed in tittytainment, such as scandals of stars, rejecting critical thinking. however, as we tend to amuse ourselves to death, the lack of thoughts is taking its toll on the public, especially youngsters at the bottom of the economic heap. from my perspective, this problem results in a lack of motivation and it will erode people’s values.
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(第一段从大画面下手，介绍世界规模内文娱至死的表象。描绘生动，信息厚度极好。遵从了“布景+主题+观念”的首段写作规划；言语质量也很高，好词好句密度比照大，且几乎没有可以责备的硬性差错)
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in contrast to traditional media like newspapers, the internet is much more likely to lead youngsters astray. at first glance, internet media seems to boast convenience and efficiency in terms of advantages. however, take a closer look, and?you will see that they bear unshrinkable duty in the decline of critical thinking. with advanced information technologies ubiquitous to every corner of the world, our lives are filled with virtual amusement, such as video games, which will waste our pockets of time. for example, the tik tok and the mobile game honor of kings witnessed their popularity in china and even in the world. despite being constant sources of joy, they resulted in the addiction of the 
internet?among youngsters. as teenagers lack self-control, most of them tend to immerse themselves in the virtual world and get lost.
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(第二段画面规模减小，会集于互联网媒体对青年的戕害。论说遵从了“实例+分析评价”的循证论说原则，没有落入文字游戏的圈套)
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furthermore, as entertainment industries increasingly pursue profits and enormous publicity, they spare no effort in drawing attention from the public and bring myriad problems. the reason why tv plays starred by popular online celebrities with huge fan bases are fashionable across china is the bandwagon effect of youngsters. entertainment industries tend to hype online influencers in order to attract teenagers with deceptively high-quality programmes. but actually, these programmes are low-budget and invaluable. with traditional media gone out of our focus, what we can do to keep up with the trend of times is to access the internet and watch these programmes. therefore, all these low-quality programmes will go viral and lower our discrimination in variety shows.
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（第三段是第二段的平行段，论说视点转为影视文娱作业）
上外考研英语mti英语翻译基础翻译操练讲析节选
“amusing ourselves to death” demonstrates the dilemma the working-class encounters—unlike social elites, they are under great pressure of daily life and have less outlets for their passive emotions. those regarded as the “working-class” tend to be paid less than social elites. the typical working man would collect his wages at the end of a month and then, it was widely believed, would struggle to raise their children. in this regard tittytainment serves as the best way for them to seek comfort. admittedly, reality shows, role playing games and earworms, to a large extent, can relieve their stress and loneliness. however, when they lose their own perspective in terms of high-quality entertainment, they will be marginalized in the society dominated by elites and conversely feel dejected both in their work and life in the end.
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（第四段把论说从表面往下走了一步，从社会层面分析了文娱至死、奶头乐发生的根柢缘由，即社会经济缘由。一起与上两段的内容有具体联络，躲避了内容的割裂感。深度分析的期间对作者的基础社会常识需求比照高，堆集不可的同学一般会呈现文字游戏表象，即“把同一句话用紧缩和扩写的方法重复重写；名贵的是，这一段的内容没有一句废话）
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from what has been discussed above, although amusement is an effective way to relieve one’s pressure, it fails to deliver the goods for most youngsters and the working-class in this internet era. unwilling to fall prey to the content creators? it is not what you can handle alone.
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（最终一段是对全文中心观念的总结。最终的疑问句字字锤心，给人留下深化形象）
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总评：
这篇文章根柢可以代表考场上写出的作文水平的第一部队。首要利益包括：
①言语质量高。许多运用了许多地道的分配，用词也没有呈现失控的表象；在表述逻辑凌乱的信息时，可以恰当运用语法，构成正确的长难句；
②规划理解有逻辑。行文规划是“引入-分观念1（具体表象）-分观念2（具体表象）-分观念3（内在缘由）-总结”的总分总规划，读来逻辑流通，信息充分，论说有力；
③循证论说的写作气质。作者避免了常见的喊标语式论说，用丰厚生动的实例佐证了自个的观念，增强了证明的说服力；
④亮眼的最初和结束。最初段运用了吸睛的概念（文娱至死，奶头乐）作为全文对互联网文明的评价，可致使使读者快乐喜爱；结束段用疑问句加深了无力感，给读者留下深化的阅览形象。
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